perspective looks great on the ship up top, and the lower ship is really well drawn. a great design. what are those four lines meant to represent where the upper ship is coming from? is it sort of a warp hole? that's a little unclear. also, is it meant to be so close to the other ship? compositionally, i want to move the camera to the left a bit.
yea, i hear ya. the lines are supposed to be parts that ejected after the ship launched. but i realize now that those are only used for multi-staged rockets. there would be no point for them here... unless i add another booster floating around. also pointless. the view is kept that way because in the flash animation, the camera will be panning across that empty space.